I'm a frustrated writer and avid reader of horror, thriller, fantasy and sci-fi (in that order). One day I'll do less of the latter and more of the former. No, really ...
What starts as an extremely promising short tale with a classically creepy set-up, prematurely blows its load on an ending that is over far too quickly, is far from satisfying, and fails to link what happens earlier in the story with the final scene.